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From nonexistence to consciousness
Blackness to dimness
The covers of the camera’s slide off
I look around my still room

Delirious while stumbling out of bed
Ending the peace
Forcing the tape up joints to move
The reopened wounds already scared over

Feeling for the dresser
Opening the slot
Grabbing the uniform of the day
Choosing my masks for each event

Into the white room
Shimmering and telling
The sun shining throughout each tile
I shut my eyes tight and get to work

The siring pain waking yet lulling
The steam blanketing my body
Helping to cleanse this corpse for the day
Washing away the stink of my sins

Stepping into the cold world
Wiping down the numb flesh
Staring into the glimmering mirror I see a face
Shocked at how unfamiliar it is

Dark and musty windows
The complexion of the dead
Divots and cracks throughout this statue
Who is this?

Averting my glaze
Shaken and estranged
I finish my daily routine
Dressing this mannequin

Leaving the bathroom
Lost in a haze of stress and confusion
I head off to my obligations
Anxious of the decaying man I have become
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Author's Comments

Just a poem of recent events where it seems all the stress and anxiety has had major effects on my body.

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:iconkoroku-ice-princess:
Your use of words in this is nothing less than beautiful. 0,0 This was my favorite stanza:

The siring pain waking yet lulling
The steam blanketing my body
Helping to cleanse this corpse for the day
Washing away the stink of my sins

I like this one because it seems to have a lot of power in each line, and it flows rather nicely. Now tell me, do you really consider your body a corpse?

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"Hiding in the Flower Patch"
The sun shines down upon my face, but I hate every ray. In the shade I want to dwell, so I have hidden myself in the colorful foliage, hating the bright colors, but hating the sun more.
:icontommythefox:
Yes I do trust me , I'm going on no sleep or breakfast right now and trust me it is a corpse because I am just pulling it's strings to move, and thank you for the favorite. But the interesting thing is comparing it to its original I forgot I wrote.

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In The Wind
:iconkoroku-ice-princess:
what's the original? I remember feeling like it was just a sack of flesh going through motions that never really reached me...>.< I'm not much of a breakfast person....I have to constantly remind myself to eat it

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"Hiding in the Flower Patch"
The sun shines down upon my face, but I hate every ray. In the shade I want to dwell, so I have hidden myself in the colorful foliage, hating the bright colors, but hating the sun more.
:icontommythefox:
lol I can send it to you when your on, and i just love the feeling, thats how i was when i got my piercing XD

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In The Wind
:iconkoroku-ice-princess:
Cools..:D the feeling intrigues me...i hate it...love it...am totally fascinated by it...>.<

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"Hiding in the Flower Patch"
The sun shines down upon my face, but I hate every ray. In the shade I want to dwell, so I have hidden myself in the colorful foliage, hating the bright colors, but hating the sun more.
:icontommythefox:
then get more of it and enjoy

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In The Wind
:iconkoroku-ice-princess:
>.< i will have to work on that later...if i was to think about that and like that at the moment then i would probably crack and get mucho depressed

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"Hiding in the Flower Patch"
The sun shines down upon my face, but I hate every ray. In the shade I want to dwell, so I have hidden myself in the colorful foliage, hating the bright colors, but hating the sun more.
:icontommythefox:
lol ok ok

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In The Wind
:iconmaidenofwar:
this is... really beautiful...

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"Never sit and wait for death... Never waste a single breath..."

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